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We are still in protagonist backstory territory today (the 5th), including the contest, for those doing that.

Now, this beggars the question: how much back story is too much?

How long is a piece of string?

The thing is, not all of the back story is going to make it into your final work. Now, a lot of writers feel that because they have done all the hard work of creating a world, a character, whatever, then, goshdarnit, they are going to let the reader know how much work they did and cram it all into their final novel. Not necessary! Chekhov's gun matters!

A personal example: In my book Invasive Species, looking at my notes, the narrator (sidekick to the main character):
*CheckGr* 175 cm tall
*CheckGr* 90kg
*CheckGr* 33 yrs old*
*CheckGr* brown hair
*CheckGr* brown eyes
*CheckGr* grew up in rural SA*
*CheckGr* parents retired to the state capital*
*CheckGr* grew up with 1980s music and films care of his parents*
*CheckGr* first girlfriend was in yr 8 (age 13) and they stayed together for 3 years
*CheckGr* did standard maths , English, biology, Australian history and physical education-health for matriculation, gaining an ATAR of 74
*CheckGr* started at uni doing a phys ed teaching degree; switched after 1st year to general JP/Prim teaching degree
*CheckGr* graduated uni with a GPA of 6.1
*CheckGr* dated a fellow teaching student all through uni, but she didn't want to move to the country like him, so they split
*CheckGr* in his early 20s had a habit of speeding; came close to losing his licence twice
*CheckGr* worked through university at McDonalds; now cannot stand to even smell it
And so on, and so on... for around a page of hand-written stuff.
How much made it into the story? Everything marked with an asterisk * made it in. The rest is there, in my notes, and informed the character (especially his grades), but were not mentioned and, a lot of it, meant nothing. But it did mean he was filled out completely.

To look at this sort of thing a little more in depth, here's something I prepared earlier:



And for those interested, here is the book (published by AM Ink!)
ASIN: B09JGDNQML
Product Type: Kindle Store
Amazon's Price: Price N/A

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