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Jul 17, 2024 at 7:09am
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Re: Neuropsychology Crime Story?
by Zen
Congratulations on joining WDC and also on becoming a writer. Twenty-nine is a good age - still young yet with a bit of life experience to lean on, that should allow more depth to your stories.

Your story idea looks like a good one. The Melanie character is going to be complex, and so are her alts, so you'll need to define them well. Both Melanie and her alts are in danger from the protagonist, which begs the question why she wasn't attacked when her therapist was killed? That leads to the next question, is the killer the real protagonist, or just another victim defending themself?

Good luck!
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