Oh nice, sound cool. In terms of making action such a focal point in my writing is - it's gonna sound strange - from DnD. Everything revolves around conflict in all stories but in DnD it is more prominent, if the players don't take action the story doesn't progress and as a DM I have to craft the story to make them want to take action.
So my advice is to think why the characters need to take action and what would happen if they don't. Hopefully that helps, best of luck with your project.
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