Noticing Newbies

Hey there sassysue —

Welcome to Writing.Com (WDC/WdC)!


I took a look at your port and I'm genuinely curious where you're at on your writing journey. My first suggestion would be to put more time and care into the presentation of your writing. The title of your first chapter title lacks proper capitalization. It also lacks a gripping hook. These are the first things potential readers see when they come across your work. You've got to put your best foot forward; if you present your work in a way that doesn't show care and attention to detail (like basic grammar) then most folks will skip it because they'll assume your actual writing will be the same way. And we don't want that! We want people to reader your tales and the wonderful worlds you create

I'm also asking because even your username "mybooksucks123" seems to lack a seriousness or confidence in your craft. I'd suggest joining a group here on site to fine-tune your writing and gain confidence through mutual reviewing


Casual reviewing:

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WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  (E) Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of eight Quills! #1300305 by Maryann

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The Poet's Place   (E) Poets can discuss, review, request reviews, etc. of their unique form of writing. #1937699 by Dave

FORUM

Positive Hearts Review Forum   (13+) For giving honest and positive reviews #2229793 by Beacon's Anchor

Genre-specific peer reviewing groups:

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WYRM  (13+) A group for those dedicated to writing and reviewing speculative fiction. #1142497 by WYRM

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The Steampunk Authors' Guild   (E) Group for those who wish to learn, practice, write in, promote, and review Steampunk. #1776061 by Beck Firing back up!

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Flights of Fantasy Group  (18+) A group for writers of fantasy stories and poetry #2295322 by A E Willcox