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Mar 1, 2024 at 7:53pm
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Re: Hi - I need some input
by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
Hey!

Think about the sound it makes... does it sound like a snake hissing? Use a simile *Right* ...the hatch opened with the sound like a hiss from a snake.

Something like that. *Wink*


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Hi - I need some input · 03-01-24 7:32pm
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