Well I like it so far, and love to see that Will is pleasantly surprised with the choices Chelsie is making. Normally he is so distracted by worrying about her ambitions that he doesn't just have fun with her. It's also nice to see Chelsie do what she *really* wants instead of doing the power hungry things first and then softening. I like seeing her as just a normal girl who struggles with her own and others expectations who see her only as a sex object who is vicious and vile. I love that she saw the chance to take a break from all of that and immediately took it, thereby highlighting one of the best, and (sometimes) worst qualities of Chelsie's character.
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