If the investigation of the wife's murder overtakes that of Banks, especially to the detriment of the Banks investigation, then, yes, it would be the inciting incident.
But, curious here - is he a police detective? In Australia, this would bring 2 issues. After the death of a loved one, a detective would not be allowed to investigate a case until official grief counselling had taken place, and if he was already on a case - such as this - he would be removed. And second, as his wife had a connection with Banks, he would never have been put on the case in the first place.
As a Private Investigator, none of that would matter, except he would be completely messed up after his wife's death, and that would really affect his ability to think clearly.
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