My premise is not as clear as I think it should be.
Here is what I have: A determined young woman must find the cause of a mysterious curse plaguing the family before it robs her young charge of his life.
Does this make sense? Can it be worded better? Suggestions are welcome, thank you in advance. Should I mention her life is in danger as well?
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