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Sep 12, 2023 at 11:47pm
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Review of "Bells"

I suggested: There may be one slight edit that I recommend. "Deafen by car horns" seems a little awkward. It feels like the tense is off you might want to edit the word to "Deafened"
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1 Ticket Please · 09-12-23 11:47pm
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Re: 1 Ticket Please · 09-15-23 6:59pm
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