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Sep 7, 2023 at 10:32pm
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Review of "Yugioh the start"

I recommended: One thing I strongly recommend is when adding new choices to title the chapter. Don't just leave the default continue choice as a title. It is much easier to navigate the story outline if people can see what title they are navigating to.
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1 Ticket Please · 09-07-23 10:32pm
by KingsSideCastle
Re: 1 Ticket Please · 09-08-23 11:40am
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