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Sep 4, 2023 at 2:20am
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Re: 2T review
It's after 1 am and I'm very tired. I refuse to go to bed until the forum is updated! *Irritated* Anyway, the point is to please bold your suggestions and corrections. I had trouble picking out 3 for sure. To me, I think your 3rd thing was the criticism that this story was too much like the other and getting old, but are they meant to be read back to back or did you just choose to do that? That's not really a suggestion or even a correction. *Think* Anyway, whatever. I'm tired. Please just be sure to make the suggestions and corrections stand out more next time, however you choose to do that, even if it's with...

SUGGESTION: Blah, blah, blah... *Wink*

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