WdC 2023 Birthday Review Raffle - CLOSED

Nice, though you don't need "For review of" since it posts as "Review of..." lol

I would recommend you consider adding the original lines when you make suggestions. What you do isn't wrong. But if you post the original lines AND the suggested corrections, the author can better see the changes you recommend. Otherwise, they're reading the suggestions on something they may have written and not seen in 10 years. I've literally been reviewed on things I didn't think were mine until I saw them in the port. We don't want to JUST get tickets. We also want to help them really grow as a writer.

You did a nice job and definitely had some valid points.

Just so you know, you don't have to post each review one by one. I just don't want folks hoarding them until the last day, but if you do 6 reviews in a day, feel free to post all 6 at once. Don't update the post though, as that might end up confusing us. Start a new post each time you post more, but you can post 6 in 1 post. Know that you don't want to wait beyond 8 because that's as many numbers as the system will auto-populate. You'll have to go grab the review ID numbers yourself if you want longer than 8 reviews to post.

Keep it up! I look forward to see you around all month!