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Sep 1, 2023 at 11:19pm
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Re: And another review - just one ticket this time, please
Okay, your review really amused me but I can't say your advice of staying away for the machines writing stories is a valid suggestion. *Laugh* I mean, if you had given a couple of quotes from there and talked about how it was too simplistic and a writer should be able to write it better, then give a better example, sure. But while your review amused me, I can't give you a ticket for that. I did send it to Sticky Draconic Vampire saysHH, in case she disagrees, but I'm guessing not. I'll post here again if I'm wrong. *Wink*

Good try, but I mean REAL suggestions to ACTUALLY improve this specific piece. *Laugh*

Keep at it! You're still way ahead of the rest of those yokels! *Laugh*



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And another review - just one ticket this time, please · 09-01-23 8:02pm
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*Star* Re: And another review - just one ticket this time, please · 09-01-23 11:19pm
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