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Oct 12, 2022 at 6:34pm
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Master plot
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Yecta's journey

Act 1-rise of the lords

Flaws;
1. he is living a life of delusion, living as a mortal when he is a god. (how can you be true to others if you can't be true to yourself)

2. has no faith, he has no faith in the gods including himself(watched 10 of his civilizations be destroyed by his brother or his cult)
(how can you have belief in yourself if you have no faith)
3. trust in gods, Anger at the gods-questioning their judgment (his reaction to Hathor)

Setup;
1. want-a simple life where the only time he has to use his abilities is to heal land and people

2. no faith-has no faith or trust in any of the gods(answers fathers call out of loyalty)

3. Pangea-Egypt, hiding as a mortal and not interfering with the lives they lead leaving the choice up to them to make their own paths

Theme stated

must go a pilgramage-needs to have faith in the gods and himself

Catalyst
1.Hathor has come to collect Yecta by Atums orders( meeting of the gods)Calling Yecta to action

2.The land turns grey and plants turn to ash-Yecta's hands turn cosmic with a gold glow portecting the people from instant death-Azmet convinces him to answer the call.

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Master plot · 10-12-22 6:34pm
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Re: Re: Master plot · 10-13-22 1:28am
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