WdC 2023 Birthday Review Raffle - CLOSED

This one is barely 2 tickets, but I'll give them to you this time around. There was more you could have done with this review, which was just over 500 characters. I'd suggest with this review you could have recommended that she add a third genre instead of leaving it as "other." You also told her that the layout was a mistake and that it needs more spaces; I think specifically suggesting that breaking the story into shorter paragraphs would make it easier to read, on paper and on screen. Just some thoughts for future reviews.
Cheers!

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     “Judge tenderly, if you must. There is usually a side
     you have not heard, a story you know nothing about,
     and a battle waged that you do not have to fight.”
     ~Traci Lea Larussa