I enjoyed the chapters. Getting to see new characters developed in a story like BoM is always a great thing. I think Natalie bringing Will and the book to Eastman would be an awesome story line to explore. Because Will doesn't have any prior relationships to any of them, I wonder how he'd fit into the hierarchy. Natalie would most likely defer to Alyssa but would Will? Even though Alyssa is, from what I understand, much nicer than Chelsea how would she handle being given that much power? And what would the three of them do with it? Would Alyssa use the masks at Eastman? Or would she, through talking with Will about the power structure at his high school, want to clean up Westside? It would be something I'd definitely be interested in reading in the future.
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