This is an interesting idea, Will offering Cindy Chelsea as a slave if she does as he says. It’s functionally putting Will in a Clover Mystery esque role, which isn’t really something that’s been done before. At least not on his own initiative. It’s rare for us to see Will in a position where he interacts with those whose lives he steals, much less in a position where he has all the power versus somebody who’s used to being at the top of the school. Especially when he’s offering her a position as a subordinate instead of a partner. It has a lot of potential to be unique.
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