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Jan 28, 2022 at 11:14pm
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Re: Blame it on my Muse PROMPT Day 5
by Averren Author IconMail Icon
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Day 5 entry.

I am asking any and all reviewers, please take a close look at my dialog. I am want to know if I am punctuating it correctly. Are my transitions clear? Does the point of view shift seamlessly? Can you tell who I am speaking through?

Anything helps.

Thanks bunches.

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Re: Blame it on my Muse PROMPT Day 5 · 01-29-22 2:21am
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