Thanks, concrete_angel! I was going to have it like, "He smelled the acrid smell of old urine," but I wasn't going to have him DOING anything. It was just going to be a 1 paragraph description. But thanks for the tip. Of course, with you entering, I need to either be on my A+++ game or figure it's okay to get 2nd or 3rd place.
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