I haven’t been able to add to this line much for secret reasons, but this chapter, although it appears fairly inoccuous, has a major turning point at the end.
The weird part of this line is that all book of masks’ handful of readers know something is up. They probably can even guess what has happened. Will, however, does not know. And that presents a challenge. Does he continue and see how it plays out - an option that could be incredibly dangerous for him for reasons that, once again, readers know? Does he call bullshit? Or does he drag in some new allies into the bizarre situation he’s found himself in?
These aren’t three minor options. They are fundamental changes to the story being told.
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