I hadn't intended for this to be a long story, but it just keeps growing. I quickly blew past 2500 words, and it's now up to 5300. And then I decided it needed illustrations.
I'm going to add even more 'meat' to this story, but I needed to post it by the 31st to qualify for the Contest Challenge. I'm going to expand on the flying experience in the Zero-G Atrium, describe the Garden Deck, Pool Deck, etc. Check back in a month or so for the updated version.
I'd appreciate any questions or suggestions. Are there details about the space elevator or cruise ship that are unclear? What needs to be expanded? What would you like to see added to the story?
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