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I am still working on redoing the second chapter. I've actually started dividing the chapters up. Originally I started each chapter with Azhar and then divided them with a line break and continued with Jazell. Now they will be POV per chapter.
Again thank you. If you want to read ahead go to my Protfolio.
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