Ophelia is interesting because we have a little bit about her from your chapters (outdoorsy, athletic, local girl whose dad holds the DQ franchise) and knows some of the local girls, probably through sports clubs.
Alyssa I like as a character; she is nosey, but her manner is fun and her disability means she'd have a different take on life.
I think I'm going to develop the guys a little too. Marius and Lucas have only appeared fleetingly, for example.
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