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Kind of wondering if you still feel the same way after "The Voice Inside My Head"  Nostrum. I felt a little bit sick after writing this one, to the extent that the subsequent chapter slightly glosses over the details of what happens in favour of explaining it by Just Between You And Me. Although, maybe that kind of gloating makes Will seem more evil.

I'm gratified that you think Will's developing into a magnificent bastard though, because that's a good place to be when writing a villain protagonist. If readers end up alienated by how evil your character is, they aren't going to continue reading. Magnificent bastards keep you reading because you want to see what they do next, even if they don't get their comeupance just yet.

Prussian, pretty much everything between "A Nightmarish Future"  and this latest chapter about getting to A Nightmarish Future the long way, so to speak. So yeah, it's not looking good for Kali, Ed and Rosalie. Let's be honest, it probably doesn't look good for Joe either.

Once I finish publishing this arc, I'll start writing the story from "A Short Hop"  , which is very close to the end of Will's story.