Yeah, I thought about that. I sent two options to Seuzz - one is essentially this (which only takes about five or six line edits in the two chapters), and one is a completely different option that sorts things out too. The 'easy' solution does make a few lines a little odd, but you could chalk that up to Will being influenced by Blake's own perspective.
It's up to him which we go with, it's my goof. And depending on that, I'll know how to approach things.
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