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Jun 5, 2020 at 7:15am
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Edited: June 5, 2020 at 7:20am
Round 16 - Oops
 
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A spell goes wrong.
#2208447 by Beholden Author IconMail Icon


Line Count: 30
Written for the My Word Contest, December 2019.
Free Verse.

I don't feel cheated about this one (after all, judgement is always a matter of taste) but it comes from a time when my poetry was really getting into its stride and I was kinda proud of the deviousness of the poem. There were other entries that took a much more straightforward approach to the picture prompt whereas mine demanded a bit of thought from the reader, starting with the reason for the title. It takes a bit of understanding, too, to see that the second verse is an answer to the first (hence the quotation marks). And then there's the sting in the tail that gives a final clue to what's really going on...

Anyway, you might get a laugh out of it. Makes me grin, even now.
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Round 16 - Oops · 06-05-20 7:15am
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Re: Round 16 - Oops · 06-05-20 8:16am
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