The comedy of terrors idea is definitely something that could be done with the chapter where Will as Abi gets the book.
The Niamh branch does seem to be shaping up to be a corruption line, but it’s actually... well. I messed up a timeframe by two weeks and so had to kill some dead time. It might be easily resolved by a quick retcon of one line of dialogue. But it’s not what it appears. There’s also a weird bit of trouble for the golems, as Cassie Harper thinks she went on a date with Will only for him to have a new girlfriend only a week later. Haven’t even prodded that.
Probably be working on one line Seuzz alluded to, though. I really like Niamh as a character, but I get why people might not. She’s kind of normal.
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