I couldn't decide what to do with my characters, so I decided to do it all. lol
When he pulls a gun, should she not care or get angry? Okay, she won't care, then when he hits her, she gets angry.
When she goes off on him, should she drive like a maniac or slam on the breaks and demand he get out? Both seems like the right answer again, so she'll drive like a maniac, THEN slam on the breaks and demand he get out.
Hopefully this helps with my length because I cannot see how I can possibly get 50k words out of this story.
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