Please let Jane know that if she wants to fix some of her technical problems with her story, I'd be thrilled to give her a much higher rating. I didn't realize at first that Jane was probably your daughter. I didn't get that whole reference "Jane's Work." Sorry. I have a brain injury from Iraq, so I'll use that excuse. Anyway, if she fixes the run-on sentence situation, she's already at 4 stars.
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Anyway, if she fixes the run-on sentence situation, she's already at 4 stars. 
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