Noticing Newbies

Hi,
I've been writing this book on and off for some time, last year I posted it online but have gotten zero hits (admittedly it's still in draft form, but that's why I put it there - to get feedback and fix it up ...). It's called 'Of All Places / Sometimes it's the Journey'.
This week I stumbled upon Writing.com, and decided to share it here for free, post a couple of chapters every week or so, hopefuly get some good comments. Maybe I'll post some short stories I wrote, too. And read/review other people's work, too, of course. See where it takes me/us.
O