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I just lifted this passage off the judging criteria for "Other Worlds Contest" by A E Willcox It occurs to me that this is actually a pretty cool story template. *Starv* Characters ~ Is the protagonist engaging, distinctive and interesting? Is the antagonist (internal or external) challenging enough?(1-10 points) *Starv* Plot ~ Is there enough conflict for the protagonist? Is it compelling? (1-10 points) *Starv* Structure ~ Does the story have a beginning middle and end? Does the action rise towards a definite climax? (1-10 points) *Starv* Dialogue ~ Does it sound natural? Is it clear who is speaking? Does it convey character and/or advance the plot? (1-10 points) *Starv* Descriptions and setting ~ Do the descriptions give a good sense of era, setting and atmosphere. Do they create clear images in the reader's mind? (1-10 points) *Starv* Mechanics ~ Is the story mostly shown rather than wholly told? Is there a clear (single) point of view? Is there good use of figures of speech? Does the prose have a good rhythm? Does the syntax (or sentence structures) make the story flow? Are there many typos or spelling errors? How good is the punctuation? (1-10 points) *Starv* Overall ~ Is there a unique voice? Does the story have a definite theme? Was it a great read? (1-10 points) What do you think of this as a short story template? What score would you give your own short stories? Post the results here. --- SteamPunk Newsletter Out Now!
--- Johny Thundersbeard Editor, Mentor & Member. "The Steampunk Authors' Guild " --- WDC Author of the Month May 2012 30DBC Administrator, Judge & Rejigger 2012. Forum Master "Invalid Item" 2016. |
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