Wow. I took a look in your port and you really do like to write. Getting four stars shows you are working hard with your writing skills.
When reading online I noticed one difference from off-line reading. Putting a blank line between paragraphs (adding white space) makes for easier viewing and will get more people reading longer pieces. Hope this helps. Take care and hope to see more chapters coming. - bobric
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