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I think they're quite different, but maybe not. Caught a real slippery slope in logic in original, which was written ten years ago, so that was a great catch. Oopsies. Great idea Kitt! I'll just enter and see if the changes make sense. It's kinda an odd scene I've set... and fictional, which is VERY unlike me. Not my best, but I like it and the message within it...

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 Time Out of Mind Open in new Window. (13+)
An oldie, reworked.
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Don't want no reviews on it!

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Cacophonous Silence Open in new Window. (13+)
Rewritten 100%. My hard truths set among a fictional couple. The Blog's Origins. 31 Lines.
#2093378 by Whata SpoonStealer Author IconMail Icon


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