We Need to Have A Talk About Writing...

Nicely done, Thundersbeard! These suggestions fit my unique personality very well!

Like anything I am sure with practice I can improve this particular style of writing poetry. Let me give it a go right now.

How I love writing poetry!
The rhymes are rather blue,
But then again the red so free
can blast the sounds out, too.

The sounds of brass in high and low
do rip the rhythms rare,
How sweetly honey comes to flow
upon my chin right there.

Great poetry may waft upon
cigar's most tender cloud
Of woody warmth 'til smoke be gone
as nose in honor bowed.

Such poetry has curves of bliss,
reminding me of her
Who has my heart and lips that kiss
so soft as silken fur.

My poetry doth my heart lift
and has for many of my days,
Companionship is greatest gift,
a friend, who ne'er betrays.

by Jay O'Toole
on August 14, 2016

Again, what a great format for writing poetry!
Also, what a perceptive friend, who presents a concept in a way, that I can easily understand.

Thank you for reading my creations and for giving me some good directions. (The GPs are simply a small token of my gratitude.)

You honor me, Sir! Thank you! :D