We Need to Have A Talk About Writing...

This is a fun little story to read. I can feel the bubbling of youth in the main character.

There were a couple of things that seemed to catch as I read it...
In this sentence.. "A Nanny obeyed, is a Nanny sated after all." you do not need the comma, unless it were just after the word "sated"

Near the end is a sentence that catches the mind a bit too... "My chest swelled and my eyes roamed it’s wings furled against it’s body." The proper possessive form of "it" is without the apostrophe (its) and you should try to avoid the use of a word twice in a sentence so close together. Perhaps change the first instance to "the".

A good story overall - very well written. It feels like it belongs as part of something larger though.

Thank you for the read!