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Aug 13, 2016 at 9:21am
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Re: Reviews of "Hard Detectives Don't Play By The Rules"
The Reviews Are IN:

Hi Thundersbeard,

Nice name. I just read your wee tale, and found it quite interesting. You had me fooled. I thought the detectives were seraching for a missing girl not a puppy dog. Nice twist at the end when it's revealed the missing soul is a dog not a child.

This wee tale catches the reader's attention at the beginning and gently pulls them through it.

I didn't spot any mishaps in spelling and grammar. Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!
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Reviews of "Hard Detectives Don't Play By The Rules" · 08-13-16 9:19am
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