I read fast too, but I've had public speaking lessons and have been taught to speak more slowly. In real life I do tend to forget and speed up, but I'm conscious of it for public speaking and recordings. I didn't think your poem was too fast - they were short lines, so the pace worked fine I thought.
The following section applies to this forum item as a whole,
not this individual post.
Any feedback sent through it will go to the forum's
owner, Elle - on hiatus.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/forums/message_id/2940013
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.10 seconds at 12:58am on Nov 16, 2024 via server WEBX1.