Thanks! In reading it, I think I don't actually want God to appear and speak in the actual novel, but I like this as it is. I'm thinking I want to play up Agrippa's panic, being lost and alone in a place that feels like it's practically assaulting him with only the feeling that he must find the Pathwalker burning bright within him. I feel like God should barely have time to pluck him from death and throw him into the Otherrealms before He dies, doing like a quick "I'm God and you'll know everything" Jedi Mind Trick in that instant so Agrippa has to ponder everything as he looks for Moira.
-Quaddy
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