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May 27, 2015 at 12:17am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: First post from a newbie
by Desiree Author IconMail Icon
Well who am I to argue with that!! :). Grammar aside (I think I have mostly small typos and errors) one thing I know needs improvement is my dialogue and POV. So any advice in those areas would be extra helpful.
I hope you enjoy what you read and I look forward to hearing back from you..... Some day. Lol. :)
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First post from a newbie · 05-24-15 1:42am
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Re: First post from a newbie · 05-26-15 11:58pm
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Re: Re: First post from a newbie · 05-27-15 12:04am
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Re: Re: Re: First post from a newbie · 05-27-15 12:08am
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