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Discussion for those taking the canvas.net classes through University of Iowa MOOC
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Apr 24, 2015 at 3:10pm
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Re: Week 2
I like it, especially the play with third and forth lines in the first stanza. all of the brokenness of it. The s for the stretching out of the more serious words. You have some good word play going on.



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