Eep! I'm sorry to hear that you had trouble with nashty raters. Still can't believe people would do that!
Anyway, I have now read your scenario and it is looking great. :) I love the initial fall into the machine. Easy to follow (unlike certain flower's I could mention lol).
:)
- Wallflower
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