You had me with the hoop. Imagining the blow by blow along with your first person narration take .. reminds me of the quality of the fiction available from Tamar Myers. So, turn em out Kiddo.
Author-to-author hint for Eveyone ---Thus it came to pass on the last day of the quicky Fourteen this contest post leaves atop darkening leaves --- "Never forget a short story is over when it is complete." TEFF
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