Cheddah! How brave to get in the car and have them shut the trunk!
That's a really good point, though. Like when you're swimming and you need breath and can't find the surface for a moment- when you finally break through you have that breathless gasping moment (or a few). Having that experience reminds us how to ground it into something useful and pass that on to the readers.
If only I weren't so accident-prone. Maybe there's a reason I don't do murder scenes often.
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