I would like to introduce myself. I'm a newbie here on this website.
First of all my name is Mike. I'm from New York. I have been coming with story ideas all of my life but never have finished a single one until last year. I posted it on Wattpad and now I have it on here. It is a short story with a twist. I hope you have the time to read and give me your critique.
I like to hear your honest opinion. Really, or how will I learn?
It's called 'Evolved'. It takes place in the woods in a lone cabin, a kidnapping and terror. So I hope the story impresses you?
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