It sounds pretty fantastical (Is that a word?), your plot sounds good and interesting for those who love fantasy/sf. Continue to work on it, get the plot outlined so you know where you want this to go. I know this is a synopsis, but you have a lot going on here; last thing you want to do is get your plot mixed up.
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