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Mar 2, 2014 at 7:44pm
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Feedback Please on my short Synopsis
by A Non-Existent User
Vesper’s throne has been empty for centuries leaving the realm of light in tethers. After the devastating war of the realms, the goddess of light risked everything to save Azriel by sealing the seven opposing ancient realms of Mordath. The end result sealed not only the ancient realms but the celestial realms as well, leaving only the elemental realms unscathed. The elemental magic now reigns supreme over Azriel, but even their gods long for the return of Vesper and the power of the celestial realms. Centuries have past now and the evolution of magic and technology has vastly advanced. The up and coming empire of Zarenthall has worked hard to find cracks in the seals Vesper casted, and finally has created a disturbance within the elemental realms. An unknown presence has breached the seal of the celestial realm thus weakening all subsequent seals. This is quickly becoming a problem that may have serious implications on Azriel. The powerful kingdom of Aruli rises to face this new threat to the throne of Vesper, petitioning possible allies to join their plight. Reaching the dark empire of Zarenthall will not be easy, but the stage is being set for the servants of the ancients to make their move. With war imminent, and darkness on the horizon, the future of Azriel hangs in the balance…

I am still very new to writing so please let me know what you think...
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Feedback Please on my short Synopsis · 03-02-14 7:44pm
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Feedback Please on my short Synopsis · 03-02-14 7:51pm
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Re: Re: Feedback Please on my short Synopsis · 03-03-14 4:57pm
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