This story engages the reader and moves at a great pace. The lead character is a complex woman who lives in the conflict of loving people and not wanting to be around them at the same time. I read this story in a few sittings, I just had to see what would happen next.
Again, if there is something I have omitted or need to change please let me know.
With great joy,
~Jacquiebee~
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