Noticing Newbies

Welcome to WDC!

I think it's pretty awesome that you started sharing your work and reviewing right away. Might as well!

There is a perfect place for writers like you. "WYRM" 

These are hardcore speculative fiction reviewers, especially scifi and fantasy. I noticed that your novel is scifi, so you would definitely fit right in. Their standards are incredibly high, and the process of becoming a full member is lengthy. The advice they give is more than worth the effort. I learned more about writing in a few months with the WYRMs than in all the years since then.

My advice if you decide to apply: read the reviews of accepted members! Those who were accepted are labelled as such in the forum where you submit your "sample" review. See what they did on theirs. Plots, characters, setting, etc... focus on story elements rather than grammar. Might as well give it a try if you're really serious about getting good critiques. WYRMs are the best.