Sorry I'm running late, folks. Below are my reviews/critiques. TheGary's reviews can be found in "Reviews" .
Quick note: I noticed that most of you wrote as if "Toby" has always been the name of the planet, but Domumen just threw that out in his transmission. Prior to that, it was only know by its alphanumeric name.
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