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Oct 15, 2013 at 11:47pm
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OT sample to my previous question
Alveroln threw his grog at him, shattering the mug and splashing grog at Penthā€™s feet. ā€œYou are incompetent!ā€ Alveroln yelled as he pulled out his sword. Penth didnā€™t know what hit him. Alveroln left the deserted storeroom with Penth in a pool of blood.
He kept hidden under his cloak until he got back to his room in the castle. It was late and no one was around to see him. He stormed into his room slamming his door open and throwing his cloak on the bed. He thought, ā€œI have to find someone. My time may be short if I donā€™tā€œ. As he paced the floor he noticed someone standing in his doorway.

ā€œWho are you? What are you doing in my room? He barked.ā€

ā€œI think I can help you.ā€

ā€œHelp me? ā€œHe mused. ā€œI doubt that. Now tell me who you are before you donā€™t have a mouth to talk out of!ā€

ā€œI am Burtow Gons, one of Lord Reikkaldā€™s aides.ā€

If you are one of my fatherā€™s aides I know you canā€™t help me! Now get out!

Burtow stepped back and replied. ā€œI didnā€™t say I was a faithful aide.ā€
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OT sample to my previous question · 10-15-13 11:47pm
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